Journal 15: Summarize/Paraphrase Practice

A good writer has to be able to paraphrase, summarize, and synthesize the ideas of others. Remember what we talked about in class and re-read Unit 8 in your textbook if you need help.

Prompt: Choose an article from this website on any topic you want. Try to use an article from a real print newspaper (e.g. New York Times, LA Times) Summarize/Paraphrase the article in one amazing paragraph or two. Use APA style when you cite the reporter. At the bottom of your entry include a link to the article and write the reference. Your summary should be 1-2 paragraphs. For example,

Pham, Alex. (2009, Mar 20). Video game revenue jumps 9% in February.Los Angeles Times. Retrieved March 26, 2009, from http://www.latimes.com

It seems that despite the recession in America, the video game industry is doing OK. Pham (2009) reports in this article from the LA Times that the industry grew approximately $733 million dollars (par. 2). In particular, Pham reports that console gaming - like Nintendo or Xbox - have done really well. Some examples given include including Sony's playstation and Nintendo's Wii, which sold 753,00 units (par. 9). While these numbers sound impressive, Pham mentions that consoles sales acutally "carry very slim profit margins for their manufacturers" (par. 10). Let's hope that new video games are received well or else maybe the government will have to bail them out, too!

Due Wednesday, April 27th. 10PM.

Happy reading,

Journal 15: Analyzing an Argument

Arguments are around us all the time. We make and hear them whenever we try to persuade someone we're right or whenever someone wants to convince us to buy their product. To be a critical thinker and an effective academic writer, we need to understand how arguments are put together.

Prompt: Choose an opinion article (or letter to the editor) from a magazine or newspaper. In the journal first give the reference (APA style!) and then analyze the argument being made.

Use the Six Steps of Evaluating an Argument that we talked about this morning. Identify the argument, Spot the Conclusion, Find the Premises, Evaluate the Premises, Evaluate the Argument, Reflect.

Here are some other questions you might want to answer.

• What is the THESIS? What is the author trying to convince you of?
  
• What kind of a CLAIM (Definition, Cause, Value, Policy) is this?
• To what is the argument appealing - to reason (logos), to emotion (pathos), or to trust and values (ethos)? What are the Premises?
  
• What is the evidence or premises the author uses to reach his conclusion? Are they true?
• Evaluate the logic of the argument. Is it sound? Are there any fallacies?
  
• Finally - What do you think? Remember that you cannot disagree with the conclusion if you believe the Premises and Argument to be true.

Here are some on-line versions of opinion articles.

Daily Titan Opinion Articles

Orange County Register Opinion Articles

Los Angeles Times Opinion Articles

New York Times Opinion Articles

For example, here's a response to an article from the immaculate Daily Titan:

Landsman, A. (2008, October 27). I'll have some breast milk with my Ben and Jerry's please. Daily Titan, p. 4.

In this article Landsman pokes fun at the argument by PETA that the famous ice cream company, Ben & Jerry's, should use human breast milk instead of cow milk (par. 3). PETA's argument that we shouldn't use animal milk for nourishment (par. 8) is a claim of policy which appeals to emotion: disgust, in particular. Landsman seems to think this tactic is really strange. She admits that she doesn't have any scientific evidence on how hard it would be to do this (par. 15), but then PETA also offers weak evidence, too. They argue that it is stranger to use another creature's milk than our own (par. 8).

Due Friday, April 22nd. 10PM.

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